This story helps me understand what my College Prep English teacher from HS meant when she talked about convoluted sentences. I sure am getting lots of laughs though!

OMG! I just caught up with the story, another big round of belly laughts!

Poor Stan...

...yes Tom, it seems some people don't know what a PG rating is...I won't say who!!!

I guess if Iris assoc. registers them with those names, then it most be OK.

Well let's see....

We have:

Arlyn - King of Iris Aquisitions (at least for 2014)

Tom - Master Cheesehead Enabler

Brad - Grand Poobah Enabler (I prefer to stick with the original Flintstones version- in takes the poop out of it!)

And Commander Rob - Commando Raindance Master....

And now I feel I have to propose an additional tag line for Rob. I believe he has proven himself to be an excellent Color Commentator!

I'm so glad I don't have to put that on a business card.

Rob - your lines have been priceless. I laugh myself silly in those sections of the tale.

OK, now that Teenybopper is finally kidnapped, it's up to Don to solve the mystery.

OMG--I got home from work and could hardly believe my eyes

oh no--just because the names are 'registered' does not mean they were ever intended to be arranged like that--there's not even a thin veil on that context


//good--it's about time

Ok, I'll leave poor Stan alone for awhile and let you get on with your story.

That would be a shame--he's got the best 'character development' so far

edited to add
nah--I can't really call it character development, but you're a real character Rob and the best parts of the story are your outrageously lewd inputs

I'm sure Stan will still pop in from time to time for comic relief!

Or pop up...

Don't count on it! I killed the dude

Just like Hollywood, I brought him back.

Me thinks Tom was getting tired of that storyline....now he's a eunuch!!!

Too funny!